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Showing posts with label story structure. Show all posts
Showing posts with label story structure. Show all posts

Wednesday, 26 June 2019

3 Best Tips to Help You Outline Quickly




Identify your story beats, save your time for writing and tighten your story structure by using these best tips to outline quickly.


By Matthew Hart




Here are 3 Best Tips to Help You Outline Quickly



1. Write Your Story on One Page


Gain these two benefits that help you outline quickly by writing your story on one page: 



FIRST: You will gain a greater overview of your story idea.


That's how it starts; an idea.

It's been rattling around in your head for weeks, months, maybe even years. You know you want to write it down, but you just don't know where to start.

This is how you get started.

Write it all down. Yup. That's it. Just write everything you know about your story from beginning to end. But, make sure you do this in one writing session and write it down as quickly as possible.

This draft is meant just for you. It's basically, you just telling you the story.

Write all the details you want. Character descriptions, and even that one scene you keep playing over and over in your head. It all counts.

Now, TRIPLE SAVE IT! I'm talking internal hard drive, thumb drive, and a printed copy. This first draft is the seed of your inspiration, and it's irreplaceable.

So, now what do you do with it? You condense the entire manuscript down to a single page.

This will force you to remove all the fluff. Don't worry, you can always get it back, that's why we saved it. Ah-ha!

At this point, you will begin to get a clear overview of your entire story.

Ask yourself, "Is there a clear beginning, middle and end?" If the answer is, "Yes" then you've got a novel-worthy story.

If it has a sagging middle, or a weak ending, that's fine, too. It just means you might need to work on it a bit more. That's the whole point!

This step will determine if you're story is worth spending a year or more to write.

If you're able to make your story work, then be sure to incorporate those fixes back into your single page synopsis.

Now, go celebrate, because you've got enough of an outline to start writing!


SECOND: You will quickly be able to identify the major beats of your story.


Once you've got your one page synopsis, you can create an even more abbreviated outline known as a beat sheet.

A beat sheet is a list of all your major plot points described in a few words or a sentence.

Chances are, in your once page synopsis, you already have most of those plot points described in a single sentence because of the one page restriction.

Now, you simply copy them into a point by point outline.

At this point, you might notice some plot points may be a little less clear. FANTASTIC!

This is the time to focus more on them and clear them up. It's much easier to change plot points on a beat sheet than it is to rewrite or toss out entire written pages or chapters, after the fact.

If you're able to create a beat sheet from your one page synopsis, you're fishing with dynamite!


2. Use a Template


Using a template will help you outline quickly in two ways:



FIRST: You will save time.


Human beings have been telling each other stories for thousands of years.

In fact, there are many very intelligent people in this world who have studied these stories and have discovered common story structures.

You can bypass years of research by simply using their discoveries to your advantage. This is called, standing on the shoulder of giants. Or, learning.

Once you web search story structures, you may find that there are really only a few, and you can experiment with them, using your beat sheet.

Simply, plug each beat into the story structure to see if it fits.

Understanding what genre your story is will speed this process up as well, as you will just web search, (your genre) + story structure. And, experiment with what you find.

Chances are, you can find a pre-established story structure, (or formula) in five minutes or less. No need to waste anymore time reinventing the wheel.


SECOND: You will gain confidence.


One of the best advantages of using a pre-established story structure is that it has already been proven to work.

At this point, you might not have all the details for your story in mind. That's okay.

If you are able to plug all your beats into an existing structure, you can start moving forward knowing that you're exploring a well-trodden path to success.

Keeping this in mind will give you the confidence to keep writing.

Writers already, as a group, have enough self-doubt to contend with, that it's a relief to have the confidence in knowing that you're heading in a proven direction with your story.

Once you establish your rules, it's really up to you whether you want to follow them or break them. But, at least you will understand what rules you're breaking and why.


3. Use Therefore & But


Understanding how to use the words Therefore & But between scenes will help you outline quickly in a couple of ways:



FIRST: You ensure that each scene causes the effects of the next scene.


This is a story structure technique popularized by the creators of, South Park; Matt Stone and Trey Parker.

The technique applies the words therefore or but between descriptions of each scene.

By doing this, they were able to ensure that each scene would cause the next scene to happen, thus making a story that must take place in a specific sequence.

The problem with using the word and between scenes, is that each scene just kind of floats around.

By using and, you end up just describing a series of events that could be placed in any order and have no effect on the outcome of the story.

The word and makes for boring storytelling because it limits the stakes and reduces the conflict.

By using the words, therefore or but, you force the plot to go in only one direction.

The word therefore forces a reaction to it in the next scene, and the word but raises the stakes and/or conflict of the next scene.

Raising stakes and conflict are what make for interesting stories because each scene  becomes a moment that will chance the outcome of the ending.

SECOND: Your story structure will be tight.


When you keep a tight story structure, every scene becomes necessary to the outcome of the story.

You might want to write out an entire chapter of your protagonist's hike through the woods near the castle of their objective. But, if they are no closer to reaching their story goal by the end of their hike, cut that scene out!

"But, I want to show how beautiful nature can be. And, I already spent last week learning all the Latin names for the flowers and trees that I want to describe and don't want to have wasted all that time!" You say to me, as spittle crests the chapped ridge of your lower lip.

"Well, that's fine." I reply, "Just make sure that your Protagonist discovers some secret hidden passage during their hike, or something, and make sure that they use that knowledge in the story in some way to gain their story objective. Done!" 

With this example, you will see the difference between writing a floating and scene sequence and one with the therefore but sequence

The first example shows:

The Protagonist finds the castle of their desire.
and 
Goes for a hike in the forest nearby.
and 
Storms the castle.

In this example, the Protagonist could easily storm the castle, then go for a hike in the forest nearby. The hike through the forest is inconsequential, and therefore, is a waste of your reader's time because the scene does not move the story forward.

The second example shows:

The Protagonist finds the castle of their desire.
but
Goes for a hike in the forest nearby.
therefore
Discovers a secret passage that could lead to the castle.
but
Uses the passage to storm the castle, giving them an unexpected advantage.

Using therefore & but have now made all three scenes connected and raise the stakes of the story. The Protagonist must go on the hike in order to find the hidden passage they will use to storm the castle.


Once you start using these 3 best tips to help you outline quickly, you will be able to identify your story beats, save your time for writing and tighten your story structure.


And, everybody knows, us writers, just don't have enough time for that! Now finish that outline already and get back to writing your book!


I hope you use these 3 best tips to help you outline quickly.


Do you outline or write by the seat of your pants?


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Monday, 8 April 2019

This Writing Tool Develops Dynamic Story Structure




This writing exercise was discovered from
The Writer's Toolbox by Jamie Cat Callan



This Writing Tool Develops Dynamic Story Structure





By Matthew L. Hart

Writer & Humorist

Author of:
Uncle Matty's Halloween: Jokes, Bits & Anecdotes

"Great things are done by a series of small things brought together."


- Vincent Van Gogh


I am now going to introduce you to another tool in The Writer's Toolbox called,


The Protagonist Game


What is a protagonist?

My definition of a protagonist is, the main character of a story who typically makes the decisions, finds the solutions and actively drives the story forward to some conclusion that effects this character the most, more than any other, by the end of the story.

What will you need to get started playing The Protagonist Game?


The Writer's Toolbox, of course!

Retrieve the:


Three minute sand timer

Four Protagonist "palettes"

64 page booklet for instruction


Now, lets play, The Protagonist Game!


Each Protagonist "pallette" has a name on it:

"Protagonist"
"Goals"
"Obstacles"
"Action"

We will spin the wheel on each pallette to reveal different combinations for each aspect of the story plots.

Using the sand timer, we will then write for three minutes about each aspect of the plot.

Ready to spin? Then, here we go!

Our Protagonist pallette, reads:


"Liz, who reviews books"


Now we just write about our protagonist. Think about questions, like:

What does Liz look like?

Where does Liz live?

What book is she reviewing?

Is Liz single or married?

How's that working out?

Basically, let's create Liz's status quo and introduce her to our reader.

I'll write with you. Ready?

GO!


"You wouldn't call Liz a "book worm." Not only did she not look the part, she'd probably kick your ass. She didn't go to the gym, either. Her athletic physique brought on too much unwanted attention. Besides, nobody really likes being distracted while they worked and, working was all she ever did. Liz did her best work at home. She made a nice office in the corner of her modern apartment with the centerpiece as a beautiful treadmill desk. She never tracked miles, only page counts. After all, her livelihood was dependant on her reviewing two books a week for an independent publishing house."

Times up.

Now that we know who Liz is, what her home life is like, what her work life is like and how that's going for her, let's give her a challenge and spin the wheel on the Goals pallette.

The Goals pallette reads:


"to see the world"


Now, we flip the timer and try to set up and answer why Liz would want to see the world. If you're having a hard time, try thinking about why you would want to see the world. 

I'll keep writing. Let's go!

"Liz read many books about every subject. She reviewed fantasy fiction books about hobbits, dragons and wizards. She read action books about bank heists in exotic cities, with car chases through Italy or the streets of China. She even reviewed nonfiction books that studied the tribes in Africa, food cuisine in Europe and followed the daily rituals of Monks in the Alps. Liz read all these books on foot, walking steadily at her treadmill desk yet, never really going anywhere. She had photos, like post cards, pinned on the wall in front of her. They featured all the exotic places she hoped one day to visit. All Liz ever wanted was to see the world in the high definition of reality but, instead found herself settling for the grainy, black and white pages of imagination."

Times up!

Now that Liz has a goal, let's create an obstacle for her to overcome when reaching that goal. Lets spin that wheel on the "Obstacles" pallette!

The Obstacles pallette reads:


"Mother"


Now, let's think for just a moment how Liz's Mother could be an obstacle for her goal of seeing the world and flip that timer!

Ready?...Set?...

GO!


"The incessent beeping put a halt to Liz's walk. It was 3 o'clock on a Tuesday. "Visit mom" popped up on her digital calendar. It was raining again. Liz was surprised she expected anything else. This was Seattle, after all. The white cotton towel felt good against her skin as she crossed the room to freshen up. A cool shower kept her alert and dress clothes sent her on her way. She didn't even notice the drive across the city as she pulled up to her Mother's apartment an hour later. She used her key to let herself in. "Hey, Mom." Liz said as she approached her sickly mother. The only greetings she got in return were the muffled puffs from an oxygen machine. "How are you feeling, today? Are you ready for your Doctor's appointment?" Liz asked and was answered with a smile and a weak nod. Looking after her ailing mother once a week was the mortar in her routine. She had no plans to see the world today."


And...TIME!

Alright! We are almost there. Now, there is nothing left to do but force our protagonist to take some action towards her goal. For that, we'll spin the wheel of the  "Action" pallette and bring this story home.

The Action pallette reads:


"gets on television"


Let's take just a moment to think about how our protagonist might be able to get on television and flip that timer.

NOW!

"Liz spent a lot of time waiting for her Mother's dialysis and would read beside her bed while her Mother slept. She was too weak to talk and Liz felt it best to let her rest. She finally gave herself permission to grab a coffee in the cafeteria. While she was there, she spotted one of the nurses reading a book she reviewed months ago and couldn't help herself but to ask, "Excuse me, Miss?" The nurse's name tag read, Maria. She looked up pleasantly. "Yes?" Liz pointed at the book. "I couldn't help to notice the book you're reading." Liz was excited to see if her review matched that of actual readers out there. "Do you like it?" She continued. "Oh, very much." Said, Maria. "I just love these romantic novels. I've always wanted to see Rome but, well, my patients are here. Please sit down." Liz took Maria up on her offer. "I know the feeling." Liz sympathized. "I hope you're not here for your own sake." Maria asked. "Oh, no. I'm waiting for my mother. She's in dialysis right now." Maria put her book down. "So sorry to here that. I hope she's alright." Liz smiled. "We should all be so lucky." The two laughed. Maria suggested to Liz, "If you're interested in reading, I'm actually part of an online book club called 'Liz Reads'. You should check it out. She does very good work." Liz couldn't believe what she was hearing. 

Times up!

Nooooooooo!!!

So, this will happen sometimes. You'll be writing along when, all of a sudden, the timer runs empty. But, this is supposed to be fun, remember? And, if you want to keep going, I suggest you do.

The tools are designed to get you writing, so if you think you've got something more to write at any stage of the game, just go with it! 

I would like to finish up how Liz gets her way onto television and begins taking action on her goal of seeing the world but, maybe it would be fun to let you try at it.

Finish the scene I've written between Nurse, Maria, and Book Reviewer, Liz, and see if you can figure out a way to get Liz on television to reach her goal of seeing the world.


Did you follow along with this game and writer your own story?


SHARE YOUR STORY FEATURING LIZ, WHO REVIEWS BOOKS,

IN THE  COMMENTS BELOW


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